A moment in time in the swimming pool

WALT:  Use punctuation correctly and write in first person 

I was so exited about going to my favourite swimming  pool in the world. When I got there my heart was beating as fast as a super car. I leaped into the pools and swam to the hydro slide with my special wristband. When I was there I lined up in the line. When it was my turn I got my floaty. I ran up the stairs hoping I wouldn't trip and wouldn't hurt myself. The lucky thing was I didn't trip! I got to the top of the building. I got in my floaty and as soon as the  light went green I zoomed down the slide. I saw nothing but darkness! I had a big smile on my face I was going backwards so I couldn't see the light but when I got out I could smell pies from the cafe. I could touch the cold water. My hands were getting wrinkly and I hate that so I got out. My day was the best day ever!

A day in a life of a bottle nose dolphin

Walt write in first person.  

It was an early morning and the sun went up, up, up, into the sky. It was a fantastic sunrise. I flipped and spun  in the sky like a balloon. If anything attacked me in the water I knew I'd be safe be in a group full of other dolphins. There are about 10-15 dolphins in my group called a pod. I am pretty fast at swimming and if it's a mako shark, I have to swim fast!! Because mako sharks can go 35 miles an hour.  I can go 3 to 7 miles an hour so a do have to go fast. But there's no mako shark here now. Phew! It's just my pod. Now I should go on with my day and look for some fish to eat.  

Duffy Day at NBC

 I chose to be an All Black. I chose it because I want to be an All Black when I´m older. I am exited today because it is Duffy Day.     

week 8 maths division

 

what i learnt in learnt virtues.

 

my maths question

 Angus had 5 fish  all the fish had 4 babies how meany babies how meany were there babies altogether?vf(right in comments)

Angus Phone battery argument

I strongly believe that battery percentage should not be in the world. It can be unsafe, your phone always goes flat and you always lose your charger cord.

Firstly, battery percentage should not be in the world because it is so annoying to people and unsafe. If you were getting chased by a bad and dangerous person and tried to ring someone and your phone was dead you would be unable to get help. Also, if you get lost you can't call anyone for help if your phone is dead. 

Secondly, it hurts to see your battery on one percent. Because it takes ages to find your charger and if you have to go out you can’t because you don't have a charger.

Finally,  you lose your charger a lot. It is sooo annoying when you don't have a charger and you have to waste your money on a new charger (2 mins later) you find your old charger.