Today I read the printing machine illustrated by Kelvin Hawley.
In room 4 we have been learning to use Screencastify
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Today I read the printing machine illustrated by Kelvin Hawley.
In room 4 we have been learning to use Screencastify
WALT: Use punctuation correctly and write in first person
I was so exited about going to my favourite swimming pool in the world. When I got there my heart was beating as fast as a super car. I leaped into the pools and swam to the hydro slide with my special wristband. When I was there I lined up in the line. When it was my turn I got my floaty. I ran up the stairs hoping I wouldn't trip and wouldn't hurt myself. The lucky thing was I didn't trip! I got to the top of the building. I got in my floaty and as soon as the light went green I zoomed down the slide. I saw nothing but darkness! I had a big smile on my face I was going backwards so I couldn't see the light but when I got out I could smell pies from the cafe. I could touch the cold water. My hands were getting wrinkly and I hate that so I got out. My day was the best day ever!
Walt write in first person.
It was an early morning and the sun went up, up, up, into the sky. It was a fantastic sunrise. I flipped and spun in the sky like a balloon. If anything attacked me in the water I knew I'd be safe be in a group full of other dolphins. There are about 10-15 dolphins in my group called a pod. I am pretty fast at swimming and if it's a mako shark, I have to swim fast!! Because mako sharks can go 35 miles an hour. I can go 3 to 7 miles an hour so a do have to go fast. But there's no mako shark here now. Phew! It's just my pod. Now I should go on with my day and look for some fish to eat.
I chose to be an All Black. I chose it because I want to be an All Black when I´m older. I am exited today because it is Duffy Day.
Angus had 5 fish all the fish had 4 babies how meany babies how meany were there babies altogether?vf(right in comments)