I hear the vacum claner
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday 6 May 2020
I hear the vacum claner
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Angus
ReplyDeleteWell done on having a go at writing your own poem. You have thought of some great sounds, next time you could think of the sounds things make eg. the 'swooshing' of the vacuum cleaner. You are doing some great work at home.
Sarah