Wednesday 6 May 2020

the rain on my routh. the hum of the heat pump
 my sister watching netflix.
my cat scrapping the cat litter.
I hear the vacum claner

1 comment:

  1. Hi Angus
    Well done on having a go at writing your own poem. You have thought of some great sounds, next time you could think of the sounds things make eg. the 'swooshing' of the vacuum cleaner. You are doing some great work at home.
    Sarah

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