this is my story from the picture.
Note from Mum: in the story Jim makes organic soup for the girl he meets- that warmed my heart when he wrote that :) x Debs
Friday 8 May 2020
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Hi Angus
ReplyDeleteWhat a creative story you have written. Next time try and write neatly on the lines. I agree with mum it sounds like Jim was a very caring person, and I'm glad they lived happily ever after. This is great writing Angus.
Sarah