W.A.L.T use a simile. My class has been learning about what a simile is, i have wrote about a dragon that his breath was as hot as lava
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday 23 August 2021
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Wow Angus! What a fantastic simile! This is a beautiful piece of writing. Would you like to have a pet dragon?
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ReplyDeleteNo I wouldn't have a pet dragon because it would scare my cat milo and it would destroy half of the house.
Angus your story is awesome you are so creative!!
ReplyDeleteFrom Matias .S.
wow thats really cool angus
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