Thursday 23 April 2020

the biggest spider


this is the biggest spider ive ever seen in my life.
i went for a work during lokedown and went on a path 
that i know and walked along it and sore a dig spider
i ran past it with my hart beting as fast as the wind.
i shod my mum and she was sooooo scard to so
year it was a good day and raely fun have fun
on your lokdown room 4.
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1 comment:

  1. Sarah24 April 2020 at 11:04

    Hi Angus
    WOW!!! This is the biggest spider I have ever seen, I'm with your Mother, I would be really scared. Next time make sure you check your punctuation before posting your blogs. I really liked your use of a simile in your story, well done!
    Sarah

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